<p class="ql-block"><b>主 辦：</b>沁陽市詩詞學會</p><p class="ql-block"> 沁陽市老干部大學詩詞系</p><p class="ql-block"><b>顧 問：</b>屈云惠 韓崇凱 張思方</p><p class="ql-block"><b>總 編：</b>袁宗一</p><p class="ql-block"><b>主 編：</b>張恒峰</p><p class="ql-block"><b>編 委：</b>袁宗一 張恒峰 陳修江</p><p class="ql-block"> 羅志明 花興浩 呂法鐵</p><p class="ql-block"> 成玉香 劉和平 索廷香</p><p class="ql-block"><b>本期執(zhí)編：</b>陳修江</p><p class="ql-block"><b>制 作：</b>呂法鐵</p><p class="ql-block"><b>終 審：</b>袁宗一</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;">前 言</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> “寬心應是酒，遣興莫過詩”。我們有幸和詩詞結緣，極大地豐富了我們的精神生活，尤其是在靜悄悄地獨處時，更彰顯其意義。可以和古人神交，探討唐宋詩詞的奧妙，可以神飛千里，享受創(chuàng)作詩詞的快感。一詩吟成，三日沾喜，偶得佳句，神采飛揚。《懷川詩壇》編委，愿與各位詩友同心協(xié)力，共同徜徉在詩詞的樂園，為詩友們能寫出更高水平的詩詞，做扶梯人，或是鋪路石。本期自詠詩投稿的有：袁宗一、劉和平、羅志明、劉庚有、梁成旺、尚游、張俊良、魏新媛、崔彩青、花興浩、白天平、宋玉成，張恒峰，蔣兵，若水、張明忠、尚嚴、許信斌、任永新、索廷香、成玉香、許傳利、甄芳杰、陳天吉、徐德仁、呂法鐵、陳修江。對詩友們積極投稿，本次編者，誠致謝意！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">作品欣賞</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">登鸛雀樓</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袁宗一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">殘陽晚照古樓悠，風撫檐鈴語不休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">俯看長河東逝去，心隨帆影意難收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">柳戲玉蘭</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劉和平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">煙池徑柳綠妝繩，輕點身邊一玉燈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不解春風香雪海，吹開花瓣滿皇陵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羅志明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">均分晝夜恰春分，剪柳裁云紫燕勤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">細雨知時親沃土，牛蹄踏響一犁芬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春游釆風</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劉庚有</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陽光明媚故鄉(xiāng)游，鳥唱花香溪水流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溝畔一窩芽刺角，采鮮咂品潤唇喉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">老院香椿樹</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梁成旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夢中椿樹正香時，珍獻佳肴碗盞知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最是相思春去遠，姿容成憶剩情癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">西域尋春不見</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">商游</span></p><p class="ql-block">一</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨日四川千朵花，今朝西域夕陽斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒風凜冽枯枝舞，夜半聲聲入我家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">二</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">海棠朵朵皆妖冶，婀娜風流滿樹開。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半日逍遙西域至，昆侖飛雪盼春來。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">耕 農(nóng)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">塞上初春料峭風，策牛原野樂耕翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何言勞作受辛苦，只盼秋時歲稔豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">驚蜇有思</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張俊良</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲春驚蜇始，遇雨未聞雷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟲寐誰驚醒？東君有法催。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 景</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">魏新媛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸鶯啼曉色新，桃花含笑醉游人。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">東風拂面春初暖，碧水潺潺映綠茵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">東風怨</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">崔彩青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">淑氣初將雪色融，踏春墨客怨東風。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">獨梳柳岸千尋綠，不染桃溪一寸紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 韻</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花興浩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">東風吹拂柳如煙，喜降甘霖潤麥田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕子歸來尋舊壘，桃花依舊笑人前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">仲春戶外</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張恒峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳綠軟風微，花紅紫燕歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰觀天自在，心共白云飛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">醉 春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">索廷香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白玉翻飛一樹開，櫻花串串蝶蜂來。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丁香簇簇迎風笑，醉了春姑艷兩腮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">湖畔聞落梅有感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">成玉香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千樹嬌姿湖畔栽，簇團蜂吻暗香來。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">招來風妒花零落，化作芳泥更護梅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三角梅</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">許傳利（深圳）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燦若燔燃費度猜，癡心三角盼誰來。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">脫冠綻蕊撩蜂蝶，萬種風情惹世埃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">甄芳杰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春正馬鞍橋，絲絳竟折腰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">感時花苦澀，種谷瘦殘飄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">自語四首</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陳修江</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span><b style="font-size:22px;">權</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我本懸垂一鐵坨，為求公道任移挪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如然落入奸雄手，競可生殺與予奪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span><b style="font-size:22px;">酒</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自打杜康發(fā)展我，戲說毀譽百般多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李白痛醉增詩興，桀紂貪杯卻誤國。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三、</span><b style="font-size:22px;">色</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">食色從來原本性，圣賢浪子也雷同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一朝權貴相加我，便入窮途末路中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四、</span><b style="font-size:22px;">貪</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">訣別不會隨魂去，出世何曾帶我來。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">貪字原只今日貝，三思自應會明白。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">油萊花</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">呂法鐵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昂頭凝望彩云間，優(yōu)美身姿勝牡丹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雖是風來忙起舞，心中早晚是香甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">游解州關帝廟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袁宗一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">解州古廟柏蒼蒼，翠影搖階映畫梁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">義勇威名昭昊宇，忠肝浩氣貫玄黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青龍偃月刀芒凜，赤兔追風駿態(tài)彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拜謁英魂思舊事，千秋俎豆永傳揚。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袁宗一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平分晝夜暖寒均，燕舞鶯啼景色新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風拂桃枝添粉韻，雨滋柳線弄青筠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">田頭布谷催農(nóng)事，陌上繁花醉路人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最是一年春好處，且將詩意付芳辰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">夕 望</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劉和平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遠上黃河意悵惆，斜陽萬古墜波流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風吹曠野千巒靜，霧繞荒林一眼幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">殘照依依消鳥影，暮云片片載春愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人間飲酒寫詩客，李白無言獨占頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春分吟懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羅志明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">九盡春回杏蕾開，人間美景似蓬萊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳舒媚眼千魂醉，桃露嬌腮萬目呆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕穿林尋故地，黃鸝繞樹擇陽臺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">聲聲布谷催耕緊，沃野機鳴卷地來。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">老宅靈棗樹</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梁成旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常吃有益解煩憂，日啖三顆無所求。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那載黃花遮面笑，今時紅臉望君羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">補脾養(yǎng)胃身能健，增智滋顏意可酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最憶老宅靈棗樹，夢中果海慰鄉(xiāng)愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">賞 春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">窗前閑坐賞春光，麗日柔風憶故鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沁水潺潺云遠接，太行矗矗嶂深藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔時渡塞大荒繞，今歲游湖群鳥翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">懷府懷梆獨花艷，老村桃杏又飄香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">遣 懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歷逢春日暖新陽，歲月蹉跎兩鬢霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半夜清篇三部曲，一壺濁酒九回腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勤耕沃土培馨圃，有穫芳林植馥場。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">且盼桃枝燃爛漫，同懷逸興醉詩章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">李商隱文化園</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">—— 嵌“風暖鳥聲碎”入詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">崔彩青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">靜倚太行壁，春云鎮(zhèn)日閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白垣侵柳色，粉萼破苔斑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風暖鳥聲碎，閣危童履攀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何人掬流水？橋下自潺湲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">酷走之歌</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花興浩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雙臂平伸步履匆，著裝艷麗有藍紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨迎曉露留身影，暮看斜陽映眼瞳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">數(shù)九寒天能鍛煉，三秋酷暑顯真功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">健康快樂春常在，颯爽英姿贊譽中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春分即景</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宋玉成</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春風十里渺煙霏，雨腳如絲落地微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花樹繽紛蜂蝶舞，香堤柳曳燕兒歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖光山色烘云動，曲水流霞載棹飛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歲月無聲年有序，皇天不負莫相違。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">仲 春</b></p><p class="ql-block">張恒峰</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">東君手一揮，潑綠布芳菲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸鶯聲囀，花間蝶影歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山川添秀色，天地煥生機。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫負韶光好，悠然踏翠微。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">晨練觀眺繩</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔣兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初開曙色入農(nóng)家，小院佳人綰素花|</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">似燕雙搖花樣穿，如鶯并步柳姿斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盈盈笑語含情暖，裊裊嬌顏暈曉霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">相伴平生風雨渡，韶光共挽也無奢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">賞 春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李廷香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">麗日清風景色新，櫻花朵朵長精神。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丁香一樹蜂欣喜，杏蕊千枝蝶舞頻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">貼梗海棠姿韻艷，岸邊柳穗嫩絲勻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尋春來把馨香嗅，款款情深醉剎人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">詠春分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張明忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晝夜輪回時差均，陰陽變幻月中旬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大江南北藍天碧，疆域東西景色新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朵朵桃花描畫卷，長長翠柳笑迎人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">創(chuàng)新時代春更美，傳統(tǒng)古村歡度春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">讀李商隱詩《戲贈張書記》感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尚嚴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">屈就弘農(nóng)尉，蝸居典獄儒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽驚書記訪，已訝玉溪呼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">君別紅顏久，吾辭綠鬢孤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">相逢愁并起，弟戲散無虞。</span></p><p class="ql-block">備注: 書記——即張審禮，李商隱的連襟，時任朔方書記。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳春分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">許信斌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲春天氣爽，晝夜兩停分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠柳隨風舞，玉蘭迎客勤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舊巢歸燕暖，新圃杏花薰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">款步濱河畔，清波映白云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">岸柳春情</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳天吉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳影婆娑映碧川，岸頭風拂意綿綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春回大地千山秀，情寄長天萬縷牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好景怡心添逸趣，時光如錦韻悠然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如詩畫卷眼前展，夢繞魂縈意自甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">赤 子</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">—— 贊陳行甲書記</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陳修江</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天鑒忠誠地鑒貞，清風兩袖掃浮塵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敢將素志詮鴻志，能把初心換赤心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰首靜思多少淚，轉身但去只留恩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">訣別或許身姿累，卻叫親人欲斷魂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天· </span><b style="font-size:22px;">登鸛雀樓</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袁宗一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">極目蒲州鸛雀樓，黃河東去意悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千年勝跡迎朝日，萬里河山入眼眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思往歲，憶前儔。賢才題韻意方遒。欲知今古興亡事，須上層樓最頂頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天· </span><b style="font-size:22px;">春 分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羅志明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晝夜均分春正中，風梳楊柳雨梳茸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梁間燕子雙雙語，郊外耕牛犋犋躬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花灼灼，日融融。踏青游客覓芳叢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜂飛蝶舞鶯啼婉，杏謝桃開目映紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西江月·</span><b style="font-size:22px;">老屋不老情</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梁成旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">已是高樓庭院，沒了棗樹椿芽。臨街門闊映紅霞，不見當年屋瓦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夢里炊煙裊裊，醒來眼眶盈花。老屋成憶在心涯，怎忘春秋冬夏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天·</span><b style="font-size:22px;">舊物的訴說</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（晏幾道體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">任永新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">父賜岐黃熟考量，癡兒捧閱盡迷狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾經(jīng)筑室囊中裹，數(shù)度攜家袋里裝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">眉似雪，發(fā)如霜。銘懷囑托枕函藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往前追憶成塵事，一首詞牌寄痛腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天·</span><b style="font-size:22px;">腰疼有悟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白天平 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然天晴心未晴，春寒先覺老腰疼。乒乓運動時宜少，對鏡端詳白發(fā)增。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">煙未戒，酒先呈。無常作息病宜生。老夫剩向禪中悟，不用良方去病癥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">八聲甘州. </span><b style="font-size:22px;">仲 春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張恒峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜天藍日麗惠風融，春意漸深濃。見鳧嬉碧水，鶯歌翠柳，蝶舞芳叢。滿眼生機勃發(fā)，萬象煥新容。堪贊青君力，造化無窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每嘆韶光易逝，問魯陽何在？欲覓行蹤，縱千方百計，終是夢成空。憶當年牛山涕淚，似浮云，轉瞬去匆匆。爭朝夕，任花開謝，逐水流東。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望海潮· </span><b style="font-size:22px;">憶游上海</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔣兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">東南勝地，金融都市，當年住足停留。漫步外灘，霓虹璀璨，人潮涌動如流。大世界曾游。好戲連臺上，歌舞清幽。雜耍驚眸，評彈書藝韻爭酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">豫園風景堪謳。看布居細膩，秀麗清幽。高閣遠亭，紅橋碧水，玲瓏精致皆收。滿腹是怨憂。知何時舊地，能復登樓。恐只逍遙夢寐，解愿釋閑愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">恨春遲· </span><b style="font-size:22px;">戀 春</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">索廷香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萬紫千紅春色艷，楊柳綠，春滿枝頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏蕊艷雙腮，滿樹櫻花粉，玉蘭似云游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紅粉爭春風姿獻，畫卷展，各顯風流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">結伴游春盛宴，詩韻才情，誰人能把春留？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行香子·</span><b style="font-size:22px;">春 分</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張明忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春拂山坳，喚綠林梢。風搖垂柳舞絲絳。游人滿嶺，觀看山嬌。賞翠芽新，桃花燦，李花飄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">誰驅寒冷？催醒百草。送芳香潛入樓寮。檐前燕語，陌上童謠。望月光柔，燈光秀，彩光韶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偷聲木蘭花 ·</span><b style="font-size:22px;"> 春分有吟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">許信斌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏花綻放春過半，垂柳隨風呼紫燕。濟水生煙，日月輪回又一年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">時光不待斜陽晚，今借平臺將玉喚。三月花妍，相聚云臺人月圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳梢青 . </span><b style="font-size:22px;">庭院春</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block">徐德仁</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明媚陽光，暖鋪庭院，棕櫚高揚。桂綠竹青，海棠花嫩，榴樹條黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棗萌柿吐芽長，月季抖、盆蘆刺芒。山水清漣，睡蓮啟動，淺底魚翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;">蔣兵七律欣賞</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">張恒峰</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">晨練觀眺</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">蔣兵</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">初開曙色入農(nóng)家，小院佳人綰素花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">似燕雙搖花樣穿，如鶯并步柳姿斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">盈盈笑語含情暖，裊裊嬌顏暈曉霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:20px;">相伴平生風雨渡，韶光共挽也無奢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 首聯(lián)描繪了曙光照進農(nóng)家小院，佳人綰著素花，準備跳繩的情景，營造出一種溫馨、寧靜的田園氛圍。頷聯(lián)用“似燕雙搖”比喻動作的輕盈，用“花樣穿”表明動作的嫻熟，用“如鶯并步”比喻動作靈活，用“柳姿斜”形容體態(tài)的柔美，一幅佳人跳繩的瀟灑畫面，如特寫鏡頭呈現(xiàn)讀者面前，讓人印象深刻。頸聯(lián)轉入描寫佳人的音容嬌顏，其中“暈曉霞”特別傳神。尾聯(lián)升華主題，表達了與伴侶共度風雨，珍惜時光的情感。整首詩意像清新，比喻精妙，動靜結合，情感升華自然，猶如一幅水墨動畫，在跳繩的躍動中流淌著東方美學的韻律美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 不足之處：一是標題，“晨練觀眺”中“眺”有遠望之意，而正文內容顯然是近距離觀望，前后矛盾，不如直接換成“曉來跳繩”準確明了。二是前三聯(lián)寫景，尾聯(lián)抒情，頭重腳輕。三是“也無奢”收尾略顯直白，可嘗試更含蓄的表達方式。四是首聯(lián)寫的是“佳人”，尾聯(lián)變成“相伴”，似乎變成了戀人或夫妻，銜接不緊密，感覺矛盾。另外“花”字重復。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p>
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