<p class="ql-block">松原老年大學(xué)初級(jí)詩詞班第五節(jié)課寫物暗喻人 在朱繼文老師帶領(lǐng)下同學(xué)們創(chuàng)作出大量?jī)?yōu)秀作品</p> <p class="ql-block">憶江柳</p><p class="ql-block">唐 白居易</p><p class="ql-block">曾栽楊柳江南岸,一別江南兩度春。</p><p class="ql-block">遙憶青青江岸上,不知攀折是何人。</p> <p class="ql-block">詩詞作業(yè):</p><p class="ql-block">用平起仄收平仄腳格式寫一首山水田園詩,</p><p class="ql-block">或?qū)懸晕镉魅说钠呓^,可仿照白居易《憶江柳》,可用明暗典故。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">要求:</p><p class="ql-block">1.觀察生活. 挖內(nèi)心真情。</p><p class="ql-block">2.語言通順,意境深遠(yuǎn)。</p><p class="ql-block">3.新生可寫古風(fēng)。</p><p class="ql-block">4.贈(zèng)送名詩一句:</p><p class="ql-block"> <一詩千改始心安></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)聯(lián)作業(yè):</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:平平仄仄仄平平</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:平平仄仄仄平平</p> <p class="ql-block">教師示范詩</p><p class="ql-block">追憶</p><p class="ql-block">文/朱繼文老師</p><p class="ql-block">山間露重寒煙散,遙想當(dāng)年那夜春。</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)破蘆花千點(diǎn)雪,一鉤江月釣何人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">獨(dú)對(duì)清流</p><p class="ql-block">文/朱繼文</p><p class="ql-block">云遮萬壑蘭香暗,落盡梅花壓半洲。</p><p class="ql-block">唯有春光留不住,黑山雪化白人頭。</p> 同學(xué)創(chuàng)作作品 <p class="ql-block">秋望</p><p class="ql-block">文/孫永芳</p><p class="ql-block">半山寒露群花落,浪涌鷗飛逐艷陽。</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)阻漁翁千百渡,一船載酒去他鄉(xiāng)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">小園秋盡</p><p class="ql-block">文/風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">晨曦泛白秋光冷,露重花殘葉已稀。</p><p class="ql-block">幾顆海棠迎日俏,失群小鳥啄枝依。</p> <p class="ql-block">老年大學(xué)(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/王文彬</p><p class="ql-block">曾上老年大學(xué)班,一別校園已三春。</p><p class="ql-block">遙想當(dāng)年課堂上,不記臨桌是何人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">植樹(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/王文彬</p><p class="ql-block">前植三北防護(hù)林,一去相隔五十春。</p><p class="ql-block">只記滔滔江兩岸,望卻勞模是何人。</p> <p class="ql-block">北庭都護(hù)府</p><p class="ql-block">文/王文彬</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)卷斗石飛,庭臺(tái)拌日斜。</p><p class="ql-block">大漠風(fēng)塵起,揚(yáng)鞭迎黃沙。</p><p class="ql-block">天昏不見日,血濺草上花。</p><p class="ql-block">千古詩人頌,裹革尸還家。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">七律?國慶感言</p><p class="ql-block">文/王文彬</p><p class="ql-block">紅旗獵獵映長(zhǎng)空,萬千豐碑刻滿忠。</p><p class="ql-block">灑血犧牲驅(qū)敵寇,捐軀舍己倒蔣功。</p><p class="ql-block">浩然正氣昭天日,不朽英靈貫彩虹。</p><p class="ql-block">華誕不忘先烈志,國慶追憶偉人風(fēng)。</p> <p class="ql-block">國慶</p><p class="ql-block">文/飛刀</p><p class="ql-block">普天同慶迎華誕,錦繡河山披彩虹。</p><p class="ql-block">華夏神龍騰巨浪,太平洋上舞東風(fēng)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">送別</p><p class="ql-block">文/飛刀</p><p class="ql-block">余暉落日舟行遠(yuǎn),古道長(zhǎng)亭別意稠。</p><p class="ql-block">執(zhí)手無言相對(duì)望,杯中酒盡淚雙眸。</p> <p class="ql-block">打工仔</p><p class="ql-block">文/馮民奇</p><p class="ql-block">河村握別魚囊白,都市風(fēng)光工仔潮。</p><p class="ql-block">折柳含情猶在目,相逢恰似鵲成橋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">覓</p><p class="ql-block">文/艾林</p><p class="ql-block">天高氣爽菊花春,月冷楓紅詩客辛。</p><p class="ql-block">每向芳叢尋好句,那堪綠水醉佳人。</p> <p class="ql-block">江邊晚景</p><p class="ql-block">文/幽然</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)打霜林落葉迎,草圍野渡小舟橫。</p><p class="ql-block">一江秋水推山遠(yuǎn),千里煙霞送雁行。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">秋贊</p><p class="ql-block">文/幽然</p><p class="ql-block">一入香山五色池,當(dāng)吟美景屬《秋詞》。</p><p class="ql-block">情怡素節(jié)誰言老,寫遍楓林紅葉詩。</p><p class="ql-block">注:秋詞</p><p class="ql-block">劉禹錫</p><p class="ql-block">自古逢秋悲寂寥,我言秋日勝春朝。</p><p class="ql-block">晴空一鶴排云上,便引詩情到碧霄。</p> <p class="ql-block">落葉</p><p class="ql-block">文/紹峰</p><p class="ql-block">繽紛落葉飄何處,颯爽秋風(fēng)未了情。</p><p class="ql-block">春夏相隨無怨悔,冬寒亦要伴君行。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">追憶</p><p class="ql-block">文/郭杰</p><p class="ql-block">人生如夢(mèng)何曾醒,歲月繁花幾度春。</p><p class="ql-block">縷縷禪音堂上繞,盈盈香徑憶何人?</p> <p class="ql-block">秋蘆</p><p class="ql-block">文/葛營海</p><p class="ql-block">落葉紛紛千朵謝,蒹葭江渚葦花芳。</p><p class="ql-block">朝朝暮暮迎風(fēng)駐,夏翠秋蔥冬甲黃。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">秋江</p><p class="ql-block">文/葛營海</p><p class="ql-block">葉落花凋四野茫,波潺岸渚綻蘆揚(yáng)。</p><p class="ql-block">天翩鷗鷺魚翔水,颯颯秋風(fēng)昭日光。</p> <p class="ql-block">綠郁江城</p><p class="ql-block">文/葛營海</p><p class="ql-block">關(guān)東福腹翠新城,夏去秋臨爽氣縈。</p><p class="ql-block">江遠(yuǎn)奔騰潺蕩浩,金山銀水綠顏傾。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">靚美松原</p><p class="ql-block">文/葛營海</p><p class="ql-block">江水穿城浩涌流,連綿櫛比宇摩樓。</p><p class="ql-block">中華國慶普天賀,靚美松原毓九州。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">深秋</p><p class="ql-block">文/葛營海</p><p class="ql-block">春風(fēng)吹綻百花艷,秋杪霜沾楓葉紅。</p><p class="ql-block">九月*節(jié)令寒露近,黃金四野碧藍(lán)空。</p><p class="ql-block">*指農(nóng)歷</p> <p class="ql-block">深深念</p><p class="ql-block">文/沙鷗</p><p class="ql-block">舟搖水闊他鄉(xiāng)遠(yuǎn),月上眉頭夢(mèng)鎖辰。</p><p class="ql-block">葉落紛飛紅落淚,山山眷戀念何人?</p><p class="ql-block">憶花季(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/李靜紅</p><p class="ql-block">晨讀經(jīng)典現(xiàn)書柬,遙憶球場(chǎng)青蔥顏。</p><p class="ql-block">片片楓葉情如故,幾重夢(mèng)境竟無言。</p> <p class="ql-block">國慶寫懷</p><p class="ql-block">文/學(xué)良</p><p class="ql-block">七五春秋功績(jī)偉,神州百業(yè)日欣榮。</p><p class="ql-block">肅貪除敝施新政,富國強(qiáng)軍厲銳兵。</p><p class="ql-block">重教尊師科技盛,治污綠化水河清。</p><p class="ql-block">當(dāng)今世界誰堪比,物阜民豐四海平。</p><p class="ql-block">美帝伎倆</p><p class="ql-block">文/學(xué)良</p><p class="ql-block">今朝又遇事多秋,美霸排華從未休。</p><p class="ql-block">慫日拉菲聯(lián)印奧,禁芯加稅斷經(jīng)鉤。</p><p class="ql-block">獨(dú)臺(tái)亂港陰招盡,禍藏分疆謊話謅。</p><p class="ql-block">小技雕蟲何奈我,中華崛起必能酬。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">憶柳</p><p class="ql-block">文/學(xué)良</p><p class="ql-block">兒時(shí)小柳已應(yīng)老,轉(zhuǎn)瞬之間四十春。</p><p class="ql-block">皎皎冰輪村口立,稀枝疏葉待何人。</p> <p class="ql-block">將軍秋吟</p><p class="ql-block">文/包怡</p><p class="ql-block">西北天狼多警急,海南深冷水雷擎。</p><p class="ql-block">瀛洲露盛雀環(huán)視,倭國櫻殘菊斗獰。</p><p class="ql-block">劍氣陰風(fēng)旋紫塞,霜云兵馬枕關(guān)城。</p><p class="ql-block">匈奴未滅家何在?報(bào)曉操戈擊鼓征。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">俄烏戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/包怡</p><p class="ql-block">群峰環(huán)擁天庭遠(yuǎn),白雪消融血海冤。</p><p class="ql-block">三秋沖突絞人戰(zhàn),拼盡男人征女援。</p><p class="ql-block">埋骨他鄉(xiāng)遇故舊,猶是春閨夢(mèng)里魂。</p><p class="ql-block">穿越千年覓元祖,皆為鐵木真兒孫。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">憶胡楊</p><p class="ql-block">文/玄德</p><p class="ql-block">胡楊曾潤江南岸,雅遍全城幾度春。</p><p class="ql-block">君若與天同壽久,美顏伴得共行人。</p> <p class="ql-block">秋之韻</p><p class="ql-block">文\鶴舞天涯</p><p class="ql-block">白藏景色美如畫,橘綠橙黃映眼簾。</p><p class="ql-block">若歲寸陰思往事,翻飛稻穗浪花添。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">秋景(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/飄逸若蘭</p><p class="ql-block">萬頃良田散谷香,一垅一埂稻金黃。</p><p class="ql-block">果實(shí)累累寄厚望,布衣辛勞話滄桑。</p> <p class="ql-block">靖宇縣前輩罹難處有感(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/景琳</p><p class="ql-block">楊柳翠柏舊曾黯,靖難魂泣山河殘。</p><p class="ql-block">宇內(nèi)英豪裂眥起,祭殺倭奴萬世</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">憶同窗</p><p class="ql-block">文/呂佳偉</p><p class="ql-block">時(shí)光逝水曇花現(xiàn),豆蔻能留幾個(gè)春。</p><p class="ql-block">遙憶當(dāng)年秋月下,不知相見是何人。</p> <p class="ql-block">童年</p><p class="ql-block">文/空靈</p><p class="ql-block">夏花嬌艷蛙聲叫,再憶兒時(shí)數(shù)度春。</p><p class="ql-block">屋后松林傳朗笑,少年嬉戲現(xiàn)何人?</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">落葉</p><p class="ql-block">文/樂樂</p><p class="ql-block">秋風(fēng)掃盡層林染,落葉紛飛又一春。</p><p class="ql-block">昨日輕撫枝柳笑,如今飄灑待何人。</p> <p class="ql-block">又見紅海灘(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/華樹龍</p><p class="ql-block">丙申郵展盤錦地,九載重逢紅海灘。</p><p class="ql-block">蘆葦蒼蒼隨風(fēng)去,蔦鷗眷眷待人還。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">老君山(古風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block">文/田美英</p><p class="ql-block">云景天路十里屏,薄霧繚繞蒼柏青。</p><p class="ql-block">君山慢游不見君,求道仙境老子經(jīng)。</p> 同學(xué)對(duì)聯(lián)作業(yè) <p class="ql-block">孫永芳</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高月落雨蒙蒙</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:半山風(fēng)月有飛歌</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">王文彬</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:天高雁叫聲悠悠</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:兩岸綠柳有飛鶯</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">呂佳偉</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高雁舞水潺潺</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:滿山綠樹有鳴蟬</p> <p class="ql-block">馮民奇</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高燕舞野茫茫</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:高天月色有飛鴻</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">葛營海</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高樹密虎眈眈</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:藍(lán)天綠野有奔牛</p> <p class="ql-block">王靜</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:半江春水滿游人</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高猿嘯谷聲聲</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">馬春榮</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:天高鶴舞雨濛濛</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:滿江雨霧有飛舟</p> <p class="ql-block">幽然</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:風(fēng)斜鵲舞葉飄飄</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:滿山月色有吟蟬</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">郭杰</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高云散霧濛濛</p> <p class="ql-block">紹峰</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高月喜露瑩瑩</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:才疏自怨恨悠悠</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:半山陋室有知音</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">鶴舞天涯</p><p class="ql-block">出句 :水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句 :天高雷響雨飄飄</p><p class="ql-block">出句 :一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句 :半空雨點(diǎn)有飛雕</p> <p class="ql-block">空靈</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:天寒客訪路迢迢</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:三生夢(mèng)境最纏人</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">玄德</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高月照柏森森</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:千秋古樹有生機(jī)</p> <p class="ql-block">樂樂</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:風(fēng)高柳舞絮飄飄</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:三山野菊有知音</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">飛刀</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高虎嘯雪皚皚</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:三冬雪樹有寒梅</p> <p class="ql-block">沙鷗</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:云深鶴隱日彤彤</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:滿園春樹競(jìng)生輝</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:川平馬踏草茵茵</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:半窗月色亦含情</p> <p class="ql-block">包怡</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:帆高雁引路茫茫</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:三江露草躍潛魚</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">華樹龍</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:風(fēng)低魚躍光粼粼</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:千山雪夜有嬌鶯</p> <p class="ql-block">艾林</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高雁看路悠悠</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">李靜紅</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:山高隼掠路迢迢</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句: 天高鶴唳月幽幽</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:滿池菡萏有鳴蛙</p> <p class="ql-block">飄逸若蘭</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:雨落驚鴻舞翩翩</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:云深天高有飛鷹</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">學(xué)良</p><p class="ql-block">出句:水闊鷗觀煙裊裊</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:林深雀唱日彤彤</p><p class="ql-block">出句:一路霜花無戲蝶</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句:三春杏雨可耕田</p> <p class="ql-block">制作:子曰</p><p class="ql-block">圖片:來自網(wǎng)絡(luò)</p>
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