夢揚州//詞格/秦觀??? ???鳥飛驚???合璧詩舍 /仇曦??［暫休］拒微 <p class="ql-block">????????</p> <p class="ql-block">??????</p><p class="ql-block">鳥飛驚。</p><p class="ql-block">?片片丹楓葉，</p><p class="ql-block">?飄落空庭。</p><p class="ql-block">?惹點點愁，</p><p class="ql-block">記起當初曾經。</p><p class="ql-block">可知朝暮癡癡眷，</p><p class="ql-block">?又到秋、時去無聲。</p><p class="ql-block">輕輕嘆，</p><p class="ql-block">何時相聚，</p><p class="ql-block">願君長念卿卿。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">誰個心中似冰。</p><p class="ql-block">?今覺一些些，</p><p class="ql-block">?隻影孤伶。</p><p class="ql-block">?月夜冷清，?</p><p class="ql-block">淡淡憂傷難寧。</p><p class="ql-block">?此生你我姻緣定，</p><p class="ql-block">?伱可知、深愛難醒。</p><p class="ql-block">?曾幾度，</p><p class="ql-block">?相思苦戀，</p><p class="ql-block">?如入圍城。</p><p class="ql-block">??????</p><p class="ql-block">演繹??仇曦?復制必究?</p> <p class="ql-block">????????</p> <p class="ql-block">「夢揚州」宋.秦觀自創曲，取詞中結句為名。</p><p class="ql-block">本作詞格秦觀「晚云收」雙調九十九字，前后段各十句、各五平韻??</p><p class="ql-block">????????</p> <p class="ql-block">????????</p> <p class="ql-block">「詞林正韻」秦觀??</p><p class="ql-block">晚云收。仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">正柳塘花塢，仄仄平平仄句</p><p class="ql-block">煙雨初休。平仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">燕子未歸，仄仄仄平句</p><p class="ql-block">惻惻輕寒如秋。仄仄平平平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">小闌干外東風軟，仄平平仄平平仄句</p><p class="ql-block">透繡幃、陰密香稠。仄仄平讀平仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">江南遠，平平仄句</p><p class="ql-block">人今何處，平平平仄句</p><p class="ql-block">鷓鴣啼破春愁。仄平平仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">長記曾陪燕游。平仄平平仄平韻</p><p class="ql-block">酬妙舞清歌，平仄仄平平句</p><p class="ql-block">麗錦纏頭。仄仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">殢酒困花，仄仄仄平句</p><p class="ql-block">十載因誰淹留。仄仄平平平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">醉鞭拂面歸來晚，仄平仄仄平平仄句</p><p class="ql-block">望翠樓、簾卷金鉤。仄仄平讀平仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">佳會阻，平仄仄句</p><p class="ql-block">離情正亂，平平仄仄句</p><p class="ql-block">頻夢揚州。平仄平平韻</p><p class="ql-block">????????</p> <p class="ql-block">????????</p>