<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">丹桂</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹 </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一種安然色,仙家別樣妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陰霾生桂魄,獨立有天香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">骨氣超凡俗,名聲傲冷霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不關桃點注,品韻伴秋光。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">壬寅霜降</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋暮露凝霜,蘆衰碧水涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雁鳴排列陣,花隕對斜陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小徑幽煙靄,金風瑟野茫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人間真意薄,冷月到詩床。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">楓葉紅(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漸冷霧朦朧,臨霜各不同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋風尋舊夢,皓露染楓紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">落葉冰絲錦,流光玉樹瓊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時空山減翠,歲老亦情濃。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">觀團城山菊花展有賦</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茂苑芳菲展畫圖,嫣紅姹紫逸姿蕪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋光粲粲黃金鏤,麗日茫茫彩玉膚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">款款羅含窗里色,亭亭陶令圃邊株。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有如群蕊爭春艷,拾韻攜香自拍娛。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">依李清照《醉花陰?九日》韻</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依綠偎紅癡永晝,黃菊香無有?佳節復重陽,斗轉星移,欲醉千杯酒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫愁歲老花漸瘦,百卉厭嘲詬。守拙抱枝頭,風骨猶存,人自心通透。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">蘇幕遮?壬寅仲冬夜吟</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨茫茫,風悄悄,輕霧籠煙,能有寒多少。難得風霜冰雪到,滿院芙蓉,懶睡誰知曉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜沉沉,燈裊裊。舊夢相牽,舊夢愁腸繞。觸物傷懷思難了。不怨滄天,天也終須老。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">初冬抒懷</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿目蒼黃山水冷,飛云旅雁舞霜天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清詩取意初寒徹,苦句凌心久善緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪壓松枝枝更翠,冰侵梅蕊蕊尤妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block">任憑歲暮芳華少,我亦沈迷學少年。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">壬寅初冬憶友</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楊柳復傷摧,青荷殘念違。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">徑蕪山已障,物累意難回。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庭樹晚煙冷,心花入暮歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">書箋無可寄,寂寞雁孤飛。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">行香子?望雪</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初雪飄飛,大地無垠。佇窗望,漫灑花銀。紛飛競舞,瓊滿乾坤。若楊花起,春紗浣,玉山渾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時臨歲尾,常閑常醉。臘腸香,魚膾醅醇。清歡冬味,茶淡滋身。愿景依舊,親依旺,友依真。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">詠小寒節氣(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嚴冬二九小寒凌,山谷平川嘯北風。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南海妖魔掀惡浪,西疆壯士踏冰峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心期神助新冠滅,鄉夢家圓喜鵲鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舉酒祝福君莫忘,民強國富始長寧。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">壬寅冬景</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹 </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有風背葉紛紛落,無雨枯黃似斷魂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山靜不聞飛鳥影,水寒未見打魚人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昏昏老眼書難近,靄靄霜云腿已沉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">所幸冠毒時遠我,唯依電暖可憐身。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">清平樂?有感抗疫</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三年生死,抗疫多悲喜。應治同醫尊老輩,貧富無欺免費。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 共護民庶擔當,白衣忘我扶傷。祖傳時珍百草,神湯定勝頑陽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">思親</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:22px;">拈香數柱拜爹娘,未報親恩淚兩行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夢里臨床三尺洞,生前身臥半茅房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">饑荒歲月供求學,病老殘年苦仿徨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">早隔陰陽塵土下,兒心悔恨幾多傷。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">思念</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天寒兒欠掛,隔雨落窗紗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨起侍嬌草,閑來聽塞笳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開頻詩醉我,隨意筆生葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一曲漁歌子,思親在海涯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">依韻奉和王建勤先生《梅花》</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傲雪凌霜報歲闌,羨君抖擻麗妃冠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斬新一朵含香至,瑞萼千枝帶韻看。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不愧冰肌蘇子詠,且亮玉骨陸翁嘆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">殘冬未減嬌姿俏,風動株搖出手寒。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">迎新年</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">御寒將進酒,晴日尚宜身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">網購花平價,場銷菜惠民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行人隨卷袖,杪歲盡除塵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冠疫終消去,芳樽喜入春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">歡度春節</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚會聯歡華夏同,時逢盛世樂融融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盆盆花草香庭院,款款燈籠賀歲榮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">網絡爭鳴聲切切,詩詞應和興匆匆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唱完白雪吟梅朵,春在千門萬戶中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">除夜</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卯兔送寅虎,屠蘇醉俗人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵猶幾許,時過又三春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">過大年</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祝福歡歌華夏同,時逢盛世樂融融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盆盆花草香庭院,款款燈籠映頰紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">網絡爭鳴聲切切,詩詞應和興匆匆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唱完白雪吟梅朵,春在千門萬戶中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">早春</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">低簾慵懶酣酣日,窗外梧桐影半明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨灑枝條眉眼濕,風吹梅蕊暗香生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可憐春淺游人寂,獨傍花臺盼好晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人老簪稀時韻少,經年疫害減心情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">陽臺種花之五?早春(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幽居靜賞景清馨,培草澆花趣味尋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昨夜霏微開嫩蕊,今晨日旭繞鵝鱗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟風唱月竹作伴,修韻裁詩筆為鄰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">庭院素箋添小綠,如癡如醉樂身心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">詠迎春花</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹(湖北)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依欄纖弱綠條長,帶雪經霜折嫩黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百卉含苞猶未醒,獨君與友共芬芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新莖無意羞花小,粉萼傾懷約曉光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嬌影素心情更重。不甘寂寞不輕狂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:22px;">玉蘭花</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">素顏含笑看朝霞,無愧尊名白玉花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冰骨婷婷凝淺靨,風姿綽綽照矜葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一竿彎月牽春影,幾樹瓊脂攏曙華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不妒群芳梳夜色,豈因嬌艷向人夸。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">春晨</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曉色睡初醒,推窗清氣漫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山巒含扇月,岸柳掛珠冠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最有春花簇,無須玉手摶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馨風輕拂面,莫厭百回看。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">十六字令三首</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冬,山覆銀裝楓葉紅。無聲畫,四季美無窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">松,挺拔參天笑朔風。任摧折,枝翠葉蔥蘢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">梅,玉蕊冰天藏韻姿。寒英碧,三友總相陪。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">憶江南?思鄉三首(歐陽修體)</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block">(一)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江南望,封滬客愁生。悠步窗前情緒亂,低頭人后淚珠盈。何日故鄉行?</span></p><p class="ql-block">(二)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天色暮,夜火照申城。才上西樓傍月影,似乘高鐵過江汀。遙聽杜鵑聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block">(三)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">家鄉好,最憶是湖浜,蜂蝶叢花鴛戲水,鷺鷗垂柳燕爭鳴。波暖綠洲寧。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">依韻奉和陳少書先生《六秩感懷》</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花甲君臨喜慶期,恰逢癸卯兔輝時。</span></p><p class="ql-block">文賢未面情如故,風雅常餐敬若師。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">去日德高齊梓里,來年椿茂弄潮兒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開元試筆難佳句。舉酒同歡獻小詩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">畢老師點評</span></p><p class="ql-block">蘇幕遮?冬夜吟</p><p class="ql-block">陳丹(湖北)</p><p class="ql-block"> 雨茫茫,風悄悄,輕霧籠煙,一夜寒多少。難得風霜冰雪到,滿院芙蓉,懶睡誰知曉。</p><p class="ql-block"> 夜沉沉,燈裊裊。舊夢相牽,舊夢愁腸繞。觸物傷懷思未了。老鏡昏花,天也終須老。</p><p class="ql-block">畢彩云點評:</p><p class="ql-block"> 《蘇幕遮》這個詞牌,可平可仄之處較少,上下闋各四仄韻,填起來有難度;將此調寫成佳作,難度更大。</p><p class="ql-block"> 女詩人陳丹按此調填寫的《冬夜吟》之作,很有自己的創作特色,婉約之情,躍然紙上。由于格律規定,上下闋各有兩個九字句,或者說上下闋各有四言、五言連綴句,而上下句式結構一致,這就給詩人留下很大的施展創作藝術的空間:可以寫成疊詞、疊句,可以寫成對仗句,可以寫成連綴句。陳丹對此調掌握的非常嫻熟,運用得很得體。圍繞著“冬夜”這個特定環境,以景抒情,又含而不露。給讀者的感覺是:此情此景,縈繞在心,又不必明示。在描寫景物和內心活動之時,將遣詞、造語,句式結構安排得井井有條,恰到好處。上下闋的銜接相輔相成,很有天衣無縫之嚴密。結句蘊含深遠,即有人生、世事之哲理,又留給讀者以無限想象之空間。此調不失為佳作。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">作者簡介:</span></p><p class="ql-block">陳丹,網名楓葉如丹。原名陳菊枝。</p><p class="ql-block">一九四六年出生,一九六五年高中畢業于大冶一中(當時因病未能參加高考)。退休前先后從事過中小學教育和事業單位宣傳教育工作。</p><p class="ql-block">中華詩詞學會會員,湖北省中華詩詞學會會員,黃石市西塞社會員。</p><p class="ql-block">熱愛文藝術,對音樂,京劇,繪畫有濃厚興趣。愛好廣泛,生活充實。</p>
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洛扎县|