<p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size: 22px;">語(yǔ)篇內(nèi)容：</b></p> <p class="ql-block">語(yǔ)篇分析：</p><p class="ql-block">3a-3c通過(guò)閱讀強(qiáng)化對(duì)單元主題內(nèi)容及語(yǔ)言項(xiàng)目的學(xué)習(xí)及理解，發(fā)展學(xué)生的閱讀技能，在練習(xí)活動(dòng)的設(shè)計(jì)上緊密聯(lián)系上一單元的閱讀策略，進(jìn)一步鞏固、強(qiáng)化學(xué)生對(duì)詞性的辨識(shí)及運(yùn)用。</p><p class="ql-block">本節(jié)課閱讀材料講述一個(gè)孩子和媽媽因?yàn)樽黾覄?wù)產(chǎn)生爭(zhēng)執(zhí)最后和平解決的小故事。最后孩子能理解媽媽的辛苦，并達(dá)成we need to share the housework to have a clean & comfortable home的共識(shí)。</p><p class="ql-block">在學(xué)生自己闡述故事發(fā)展過(guò)程后引導(dǎo)學(xué)生想象“媽媽”在聽(tīng)到孩子道歉后的心理活動(dòng)和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，進(jìn)而思考這個(gè)家庭的特殊性（語(yǔ)篇從始至終僅有母女對(duì)話，父親角色缺失），從而體諒母親角色的不易。</p><p class="ql-block">語(yǔ)言知識(shí)：</p><p class="ql-block">1.掌握生詞throw， neither， shirt，</p><p class="ql-block">短語(yǔ)：be angry with, come home from school, throw down, in front of, come over, take the dog for a walk, all the time, all day /evening, as…as, in surprise, as soon as</p><p class="ql-block">2.難句：The minute I sat down in front of the TV， my mom came over.</p><p class="ql-block">You watch TV all the time and never help out around the house.</p><p class="ql-block">For one week， she did not do any house work and neither did I.</p><p class="ql-block">I finally understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.</p><p class="ql-block">Neither of us did any house work for a week</p><p class="ql-block">My mom came over as soon as I sat down in front of the TV.</p><p class="ql-block">文章時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，事件信息分解：</p><p class="ql-block">Where: at home</p><p class="ql-block">Who: Nancy and her mother</p><p class="ql-block">When: ① when I came home</p><p class="ql-block">② the minute I sat down ( as soon as I sat down )</p><p class="ql-block">③ for one week… ( the following week )</p><p class="ql-block">④ the next day</p><p class="ql-block">What: ① dog welcomed me; tired; threw down & went to…</p><p class="ql-block">② mom came over: take… for a walk;…all the time & never help out around…; as tired as… (shouted back)</p><p class="ql-block">③ mom did not do any housework， neither did I = ( neither of us )…</p><p class="ql-block">④ came home from work (in surprise ): clean and tidy: share the housework: a clean & comfortable home.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size: 22px;">課堂表現(xiàn)：</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size: 22px;">梳理點(diǎn)評(píng)：</b></p> <p class="ql-block">這個(gè)梳理值得特別表?yè)P(yáng)。學(xué)生能用自己的語(yǔ)言總結(jié)幾個(gè)時(shí)間節(jié)點(diǎn)，如，began to quarrel, during the cold war, a turn for better, the final result 另外，學(xué)生還能將媽媽說(shuō)的話歸納為my mom expressed her opinions, 冷戰(zhàn)后的 the impact, 以及ending sign表現(xiàn)出來(lái)，非常難得。</p><p class="ql-block">這是一個(gè)善于思考，能夠積極嘗試運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的孩子！特別點(diǎn)贊</p> <p class="ql-block">學(xué)生根據(jù)語(yǔ)篇內(nèi)容重整了表現(xiàn)形式，以母女對(duì)話的形式呈現(xiàn)沖突，并對(duì)語(yǔ)篇的背景進(jìn)行了合理想象：at the age of 5, my father left us... Life was difficult (學(xué)生原文中用了hard)...，同時(shí)，對(duì)于故事的結(jié)尾“我”對(duì)媽媽道歉后的情形進(jìn)行了敘寫(xiě)。完善了媽媽聽(tīng)到我道歉后的反應(yīng)。特別棒????</p> <p class="ql-block">以環(huán)形的表述方式呈現(xiàn)故事發(fā)展，借用了上一個(gè)單元狗狗lucky做客串，很有意思</p> <p class="ql-block">非常清晰里呈現(xiàn)了兩位主角的心理變化暗線</p> <p class="ql-block">學(xué)生在基于語(yǔ)篇敘事的過(guò)程中對(duì)其中的一些小情節(jié)進(jìn)行的點(diǎn)評(píng)，比如so so so so so angry,母女兩次的對(duì)話分為round 1, round 2并用能量值加以表現(xiàn)其沖突嚴(yán)重性，很有意思</p> <p class="ql-block">學(xué)生能找出所有沖突的核心housework，以houseword為核心展開(kāi)敘事過(guò)程</p> <p class="ql-block">這份作業(yè)除了把故事情節(jié)梳理了還特意配上了漫畫(huà)說(shuō)明，很有意思</p> <p class="ql-block">這是以漫畫(huà)形式呈現(xiàn)的故事情節(jié)。每個(gè)情景表現(xiàn)得很到位，很有意思</p> <p class="ql-block">學(xué)生根據(jù)母女間的對(duì)話沖突自行改編了一下情緒，能運(yùn)用到I can't stand you！值得點(diǎn)贊！</p> <p class="ql-block">不少同學(xué)能自行歸納總結(jié)，嘗試使用不同的語(yǔ)言進(jìn)行表述，例如，在表述房間很亂時(shí)用了in a mess, 原文中I couldn't find a clean dish or a clean shirt 學(xué)生用了couldn't find anything clean, 在最后“我”跟媽媽的對(duì)話I'm sorry 這一段，不少學(xué)生用了apologize這個(gè)新詞。媽媽的意外語(yǔ)篇中用的in surprise有同學(xué)使用了to her surprise等等</p><p class="ql-block">能基于語(yǔ)篇進(jìn)行歸納并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)膒araphrase，給這些孩子點(diǎn)贊！</p> <p class="ql-block">每一次的語(yǔ)篇梳理都能看到不同孩子的思維方式表現(xiàn)形式各有千秋。孩子們梳理和表達(dá)的能力在一次次的梳理中不斷提前。這是我最喜歡的作業(yè)，也是最用心欣賞的作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block">能教到這些孩子我覺(jué)得特別開(kāi)心，也很榮幸??</p>